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Jaren Loyola
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admin: moved post to Critism Threads since you are looking for a C&C. pls do include the EXIFs of the photo so others can comment on technicalities.

 

 

sa wakas! nahanap ko din. kala ko nawala na lahat ng pics nung binyag e.

eto pa lang nauupload ko. for c&c please. thanks!

 

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kaninong binyag to?

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maganda exposure mo dito jaren! Big Grin

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salamat rj! binyag to ng pamangkin ng best friend ko. dito ko nakita si tito willie rumaraket din. heheh!

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maganda nga! kasi nikon! peace! hahahaha

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Ganda ng colors Jaren!!!! loooove it! Buti nakita mo ung pics...

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Hi Jaren!

oh this images sino yung main subject mo? if it's the bouquet of flower should be ok but if you want the Dad, baby and the mom to be the main subject then this ruins the shot huh! usually in photogaphy the main subject is thew one properly focus and the foreground is blurred right? my eyes directs me the the flower everytime i look at the image.

compo wise should be ok but can be improved, everything is properly expose but somehow soft.

try to play with the curves on PS.

note: all are just IMHO,ha! syempre self preference mo pa rin yan.

post more.

so guts give your teknical opinion!

 

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Hi Cailean!

I'm really happy whenever someone critisize my shots coz that is how i learn and improve my photograpjy Smile i loove learning from experts like you. Smile

the main subject in this photo is the flower, i used the family as backgroud for epek, para maiba nmn Smile this is not edited yet. i'll post a new one pag naedit ko na.

Thanks po  Ms.Cailean! meron po ba kayong multiply? or flickr? or facebook? or friendster? add ko po kayo Smile

 

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